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Wednesday, 13 July 2016

suddenly... (winter learning journey)


Imagine that you are sitting in the crowd at the opening ceremonies for the Rio Olympics this August. The ceremony has just started and all of the Olympic athletes are parading around the stadium in their uniforms when all of a sudden it was going to be a very big storm and that it might be a flood so all the athletes couldn't participate. But then there was another news report that it was going to be sunny and all the athletes were happy but then in the middle of one of the Olympics it started to rain and the athletes were very soaked in the rain and them very not happy they all ran and found shelter and they were really really not happy. The next day the people said we have to continue the games and the athletes were very happy and grateful for the nice day the end.

1 comment:

  1. Wonderful story, Alex. It was really entertaining and engaging. In order to earn full points for this activity, you just need to make it slightly longer. We are looking for 10-20 sentences. Your current story has four full stops in it which means that it has four sentences. I think that you could insert a few more full stops in your story as some of the sentences are really long :). You will then only need to add another few sentences to earn the full 20 points!

    I'll check back in a bit to see if you've had time to add to your awesome story!

    Cheers, Rachel

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