tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8771231447378557787.post3031681292980676282..comments2023-05-13T01:31:58.422+12:00Comments on Alex C : suddenly... (winter learning journey)Glenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8771231447378557787.post-73421592904499490842016-07-20T11:01:59.394+12:002016-07-20T11:01:59.394+12:00Wonderful story, Alex. It was really entertaining ...Wonderful story, Alex. It was really entertaining and engaging. In order to earn full points for this activity, you just need to make it slightly longer. We are looking for 10-20 sentences. Your current story has four full stops in it which means that it has four sentences. I think that you could insert a few more full stops in your story as some of the sentences are really long :). You will then only need to add another few sentences to earn the full 20 points!<br /><br />I'll check back in a bit to see if you've had time to add to your awesome story!<br /><br />Cheers, RachelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10992026915931452376noreply@blogger.com