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Friday, 23 December 2016

A short Story Summer Learning Journey Week 1 Day 5

I looked around the room nothing seemed unusual, but than suddenly I heard a noise. It was sound like a baby crying outside. I got scared and woke up my brothers and told them. They also got scared. We all went to my dad's room and woke him up. We all told him the story and he said, " Don't worry it's just a cat" but I didn't believe him. So we went out looking all around the house in the dark and we could't find anything. But then we saw a cat sitting on our fence making the same noise. Then we believed that it was a cat. Then we all came back inside the house. My dad said," go all to your beds and sleep". But we were so scared and asked our dad to stay with us till we sleep. So he did and when I woke up in the morning everything was normal.     

6 comments:

  1. Hi Alex,

    I really liked your story as it is about something that your reader can relate to. I can remember times that I was woken up by strange noises in the night when I was a child! Remember to read through your writing and check that you are including paragraphs etc, before you post it.

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    1. Hi Miss,

      Thanks for the comments.

      Alex

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  2. Hay Alex... I really loved reading your story. Even my brothers loved it as well. Keep up the good work Alex.,

    sincerely: Loto

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  3. Great work Alex!

    What a cool story, I was waiting for a scary twist but it turned out normal! What a relief. I guess that is what dads are for!

    I hope you're having a great day,

    Mark

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    1. Hi Mark,

      Thank you very much.

      Alex

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