Summer learning Journey Week 1 day 1 activity 2- Special place in my home town
A special place in my home town is my school because school gives me a lot opportunity and fun things to do. School also pushes my learning and conman sense.
Kia ora Alex, Thanks for your post! It's so nice to know that you enjoy school and I really like the you used the word "common sense", which is a very good skill to have, to be considered in tricky situations, to think about others and so on. However, for this task we asked for you to describe "What is special about where you live? On your blog, describe your hometown", "Be sure to include lots of describing words (adjectives) in your post." For example: "My home town is Auckland and I love to live here because we can easy access great parks and playgrounds in nature. I also like that we have so many amazing beaches close by so everyone can enjoy it and get some sunshine and smell the fresh sea air". In order for you to gain full points for this task could you think about some reasons why you like your home town and let me know? Keep up the good work! Kia kaha, Patricia
Kia ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your post! It's so nice to know that you enjoy school and I really like the you used the word "common sense", which is a very good skill to have, to be considered in tricky situations, to think about others and so on. However, for this task we asked for you to describe "What is special about where you live? On your blog, describe your hometown", "Be sure to include lots of describing words (adjectives) in your post." For example: "My home town is Auckland and I love to live here because we can easy access great parks and playgrounds in nature. I also like that we have so many amazing beaches close by so everyone can enjoy it and get some sunshine and smell the fresh sea air". In order for you to gain full points for this task could you think about some reasons why you like your home town and let me know?
Keep up the good work!
Kia kaha,
Patricia