This blog is a record of my learning from Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ through to Tamaki College.
Hi Alex,I can see that you have been able to empathise well with the characters in this story and that you clearly understand the plot. Remember to check your writing before you publish it - I think you may have missed some punctuation or words out here.
Churry
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Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have been able to empathise well with the characters in this story and that you clearly understand the plot. Remember to check your writing before you publish it - I think you may have missed some punctuation or words out here.
Churry
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