My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
This activity is awesome as it allows everyone to use their creativity while writing lyrics unique to themselves. I thought your lyrics were great, they flowed well together and created a real mental image of Auckland.
Have you considered stepping up your post and including a video of you either reading or singing your lyrics? I think that would be cool.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
This activity is awesome as it allows everyone to use their creativity while writing lyrics unique to themselves. I thought your lyrics were great, they flowed well together and created a real mental image of Auckland.
Have you considered stepping up your post and including a video of you either reading or singing your lyrics? I think that would be cool.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Hi Zana
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. I have made a audio of my brother rapping it but im not sure how to upload it. Can you please tell me how.
Alex