tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8771231447378557787.post4299642797023221515..comments2023-05-13T01:31:58.422+12:00Comments on Alex C : Bush CraftGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8771231447378557787.post-46753107502423587502017-08-30T15:13:30.512+12:002017-08-30T15:13:30.512+12:00Hi Alex,
What a fabulous experience! I love all o...Hi Alex,<br /><br />What a fabulous experience! I love all of the vocabulary that you have used in this recount, like how you used the name of the knots. This use of vocabulary and your detail (like how you explained that you put the sticks in a cross formation) helps your audience to follow along with what you have written. Next time you could include the end of the session, where you put out your fire once the water had boiled and packed the things away so that you were ready for your night in the bush. Overall this is a fabulous piece of writing Alex - ka pai!Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12705580027546152790noreply@blogger.com